KatTrain

Favorited on youtube. absolutely beautiful.

have fallen to my knees My face covered in tears Hardly able to breathe, So many times. The intro is beautifully written, so very relate-able I ask for Thy comfort, ...

I care And I am so sick Of sitting here Day after day, Week after week. Just watching, Waiting, For you to snap. Because comma when you hide Your feelings ...

**Watch out for edits that are just a comma, they're hard to see! Curtains up , and w hat a show! A girl on stage. Her feelings out, For the ...

If you wanted it to be more like a poem, just break it into stanzas. This is more like Prose then poetry, Today I walk Make this in the future ...

Bones hurting as I'd replace 'hurting' with another synonym blood drums against veins in a frenzy, relate able unsure (like the rest of your body) where it is or what ...

When I first saw this I was like 'oh gosh no please do not tell me someone has done a poem in this format again! But you definitely opened my ...

Wait, before you go turning my front steps into a year (or you merge into another atmosphere) tell me why your hands are shaking and I'll explain my stutter. It's ...

In time, they say, all will come to an end. Life wishes to bring peace to every day, how does this connect to the above? Though sometimes life doesn't get ...

Will you please review my poem, Handwriting? thank you. :]

Will you review my poem, Handwriting? Thank you so much.

A white lined paper, holes and date on the top, usually they don't use lined paper? vital signs and temperature, blood pressure Is my name there? Do you know who ...

I have something to confess cliche But my words, they're all bought So, listen what I'm going to say take out the comma Like I'm about to die This line ...

The pen dipped, lustily moaning out the words scrawled so messily that I had to squint still no angel's tears to wash away dead pink skin resting on white. Brow ...

brown hair, 5'9-6' white brown eyes