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  • Other Poetry
    Re: Texan

    hell yes round rock rep-re-sent

    Dec 4, 2011

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: The Magical Land of Reviews

    If you could critique the heck out of me I'd love it. As far as poetry goes, I'm a masochist. Thanks

    Dec 4, 2011


  • Review please? :) Hit me as hard as you can on the critiques s'il vous plait

    Dec 4, 2011


  • You're spilling out onto the covers, moon beams tracing the contours of your body, like an artist without aim. You are not mine, but tonight I will resist the sadistic ...

    Dec 4, 2011


  • Perfect Irony. Kudos.

    Dec 3, 2011


  • You have to know when it's ok to make fun of your friends, to point at people, This stanza could be more flow-y if that makes any sense to chill ...

    Dec 3, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Distant Chains

    I find creeping, crawling ways to miss the spices of your skin The aching recipe of your arms, enfolds me in them once again. The passion pains have long since ...

    Oct 23, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Love

    I agree, the title is too unoriginal for such a unique piece. If you're going to use 'Love' as your title, don't include it in you poem. Like this: Love ...

    Sep 26, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: La Petite Mort

    Ach! Again! Do it again, put more pressure on me darling. Skin me Softly, like the poor this line and the following line don't flow well, they seem thrust into ...

    Sep 26, 2011


  • Liar, liar, Heart on fire, Tell me what you really feel. Liar, liar, Heart on fire, What is fake and what is real? You tell me that you never cared, ...

    Aug 7, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: The Splitting Ground

    I see with my eyes, unnecessary, we already know this so dry from lack of sleep, this is very un-poetic description but do not feel, in my heart and my ...

    Aug 7, 2011


  • Heaven’s a bad place to be, At least if you're as broken as me. this line is too lone If the tears you cry are fake, why would they be ...

    Jul 30, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: "F" = Failure

    My stomach is turning, and spinning very fast. My head is pounding, like a bomb about to blast. My hands are sweating, smoldering, very charred. the 'very charred' sounds awkward, ...

    Jul 30, 2011

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: free reviews all around

    Please and Thankyou:)

    Jul 23, 2011


  • Pleasseee?

    Jul 23, 2011


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