KatTrain

hell yes round rock rep-re-sent

If you could critique the heck out of me I'd love it. As far as poetry goes, I'm a masochist. Thanks

Review please? :) Hit me as hard as you can on the critiques s'il vous plait

You're spilling out onto the covers, moon beams tracing the contours of your body, like an artist without aim. You are not mine, but tonight I will resist the sadistic ...

Perfect Irony. Kudos.

You have to know when it's ok to make fun of your friends, to point at people, This stanza could be more flow-y if that makes any sense to chill ...

I find creeping, crawling ways to miss the spices of your skin The aching recipe of your arms, enfolds me in them once again. The passion pains have long since ...

I agree, the title is too unoriginal for such a unique piece. If you're going to use 'Love' as your title, don't include it in you poem. Like this: Love ...

Ach! Again! Do it again, put more pressure on me darling. Skin me Softly, like the poor this line and the following line don't flow well, they seem thrust into ...

Liar, liar, Heart on fire, Tell me what you really feel. Liar, liar, Heart on fire, What is fake and what is real? You tell me that you never cared, ...

I see with my eyes, unnecessary, we already know this so dry from lack of sleep, this is very un-poetic description but do not feel, in my heart and my ...

Heaven’s a bad place to be, At least if you're as broken as me. this line is too lone If the tears you cry are fake, why would they be ...

My stomach is turning, and spinning very fast. My head is pounding, like a bomb about to blast. My hands are sweating, smoldering, very charred. the 'very charred' sounds awkward, ...

Please and Thankyou:)

Pleasseee?