KasanKokoro

Thanks guys I didn't realise about some of the stuff. 'yous' is a how they speak up in the north east of england and that's how I want the charaters ...

Really Scary!!! I love it though. Keep writing cause your really good :pirate3: Pirate for you

Thanks guys I'll try and not use I so much. Chapter 1 is'nt finished yet this is like a preview until I get it all written. :D :smt003