Karsten

Hi there, I thought the writing here was readable and the dialogue had a few good one-liners, but overall, I'm having problems sympathising with the protagonist - he's coming across ...

Hi Dr. Who, a man who clearly has excellent taste in television, I'm afraid I struggled a bit with this piece. It's loaded with errors - look how many spelling ...

Glad I could help, Ronnok. :) Drive-by comment on the comment on my comments: Hello there, well personally, I've read Karstens comments and would like to add my own opinion ...

Robert Newcomb's The Fifth Sorceress. Regurgitated Hero's Journey knockoff made notable by its misogyny, homophobia and Nazism . :roll:

Agent Colleen Lindsay on word counts and novel length . Short answer: Yes.

I belong to the Teens Writing for Teens thread on the AbsoluteWrite forums (which kindly puts up with me even though I'm neither a teen nor writing for teens) and ...

Hi octocoffee, This was smooth and well-written. My key problem is a realism issue. I know that the Sara character's hypothermia will turn out to have a magical cause or ...

Hi Tyler, I read this all the way to the end because the writing was smooth. I'm in two minds about whether I'd read on at this point, and I'd ...

Hi Ronnok, Welcome to the fantasy forum! I think the writing here is readable, but I'm afraid I didn't enjoy it as much as Lorrilrakest or gsp. I struggled with ...

Loved "misfortunous". :P

Hi KJ, This is excellent. Your style is fluent and lyrical without being purple, and I thought a lot of the emotional content was spot-on: the protagonist's mother often trying ...

It's a UK case. Shades of the 1993 torture-murder of two-year-old Jamie Bulger by two ten-year-olds .

Preach it, brother. If you have money to burn, it's less effort and heartache to actually burn it than to vanity publish.

I'm zeroing in on the logic of the writing stuff here, which is pinging my radar a little. (1) I'm struggling to imagine a situation in which a writer actually ...

Hi shanan-cat, I could make a guess at what's bugging Jetpack here: Sorry this review isn't much help, but I can't put my finger on why I'm not jumping to ...