Karsten

20. It turns out there is a final exam for this course. I give you 8 marbles that are exactly alike except that one of them is slightly heavier than ...

Hi 82manycookies, This reads as if you wrote it in a hurry. The bones of the story sound like they could be fascinating, and there's plenty of potential for conflict ...

Bickazer writes brilliant reviews, so better pounce while you have the chance!

Best not to google Cthulhu. You never know what google hits might make your eyes explode, leaving you gibbering about tentacles for the rest of your life. :P

Hi showtimecircus, The prose here is clear and I was able to follow this story from beginning to end. I did have a range of problems which interfered with my ...

Hi Whisperer, When reviewers give you their time and effort for free in the hope of helping you improve, the appropriate response is "Thank you", regardless of whether you agree ...

I can't believe nobody is getting the Cthulhu references. (This was awesome, by the way.)

Hi Whisperer, This story dropped me with a bang within 350 words, and I want to show you why I had such a quick and strongly negative reaction to it. ...

If you have any good advice, please tell. 1. Your absolute minimum wordcount goal every day is 1667 words. Fail to meet it even once, and you're starting down a ...

Lucinda sounds like an upper-middle to upper-class woman, probably Russell Group-educated (that's Ivy League to you Americans), from a wealthy family. She now works in fashion. She's blonde and stylis

My idea is more based on Norse mythology, and follows a teenage boy caught up in Fimbulwinter, the great winter that precedes Ragnarok. Along the way, he meets a girl ...

Not surprised to score as an INTJ, heavy on the I. I'm a thinker and a planner.

You have a very positive attitude, which does you great credit. :)

What specifically do you need tips on? Writing material that you don't mind sharing with the class ... (1) Redraft, polish and spellcheck. If you hand out first drafts, you're ...

Hi skjold, I struggled to follow this story at all because of technical problems with the writing itself. You asked not to be reviewed on "grammer" and spelling, but I'm ...