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Hi Rebel, I’m glad you’re writing in my favourite genre! I hope I can give you some useful tips. As we discussed in chat, I thought the prologue was a ...

British mathematician Roger Penrose calculated the mathematical probability of the formation of the world we live in by chance to be 10^10^123 to 1. In mathematics, 10^123 means 10, followed ...

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Hi twilight tiger, I just read your two chapters back to back, so I’m going to do a joint review. Overall, I found this story quite brief and confusing. The ...

Why has this thread been resurrected from the dead? I just wasted my time writing up a review for someone who hasn't logged in since October 2006. :? edit: This ...

Hi Tanya, Having read all 15,000 words you’ve posted to date, twice, I think I can explain the rejections you’ve received for this novel. This review may sting, so please ...

Thanks, I really appreciate that. I totally agree with you on description and stuff like that. My main goal right now is to get the story down, then edit it ...

Hi A. M., Review as per your request. :) Overall, I’m afraid I wasn’t quite as hooked as cheez_burger. I found the piece quite brief: you’ve crammed several life-changing events ...

Hi peanut, I’m not a huge reader of

Writeup of the line-edit comments from the .doc file: Prologue comment - The prologue felt quite repetitive in places. Ideas tend to be repeated 2-3 times: the idea that Scarlet ...

Hi Stella, I enjoyed the writing throughout this piece, and the strong first line and dramatic opening hooked me, but ultimately I found that my interest petered out as the ...

Your review, as requested . :D edit: And some other recent reviews to give people an idea of what they're getting into: one , two , three , four .

Hi Moriah, Per your request, I’ve read this story all the way through from the beginning. Overall, I’m feeling a little ambivalent. It’s easy to read, your prose is fairly ...

Here is my story - it's other fiction. Kind of like a horror story. Thank you so much. :) Sorry, Logan, I meant to reply - I'm specifically looking for ...

23 and a half. I'm planning to crack the big 25 at tomorrow's write-in. :D