Karsten

Every word of Jenthura's review is genius.

Hi bookgeek, While I enjoyed some elements of this story, overall I felt that it was let down by serious and persistent grammar problems. Nearly every sentence features an accidental ...

Hi Hiadel, Overall, I feel ambivalent about this piece. I'm not sure I agree with your decision to tell everything that happened with narrative summary rather than show us the ...

Another option is to just use the front door - come up with disguises and/or legitimate reasons to enter the castle. Terry Pratchett's characters in Monstrous Regiment dressed up as ...

I'm sorry - I didn't intend to confuse the issue even more! :P The bad guys need the protagonist specifically because of her relevant skills and experiences, but they're paranoid ...

Thanks for your comments, Hippie - I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! I'm glad you mentioned plot confusion, because I wasn't sure if that was coming across clearly enough. (Necromancers ...

Thanks very much for your thoughtful comments, napalmerski and Jigs. Plenty for me to think about! I really appreciate your time. :)

Hi mminc, Just some quick comments for you today. I found the opening dry. It's essentially an infodump, a pile of information about the protagonist's physical appearance and family tree, ...

Hi Barrett, Like the other readers, I found this a little confusing, but I also enjoyed it very much. The opening paragraph is particularly powerful. You have many such powerful ...

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Awesome! I has badges! :D

You stole my crown! D: Just messing. Congrats, Ben. You're a star. :D

Eh? I heard this was from strong and weak verbs. Strong verbs change the vowel, while weak verbs add an ending. I'm not quite following you. What vowel change? What's ...

You're welcome, fellow Brits! :P

Yup. :)