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it is prolly one of my fav romantic pieces I've ever read. Nicely done CL, nicely done. I agree

Dang, Snoink, way to disturb me. uhhh... 'nuff said

Ok, I gotta say, this was really well done--great word choices and smooth reading, as Bob said. Really my only beef with this is the sheer mass of words on ...

I agree with Sam, and I do love this story! It reminds me slightly of Jane Austen's work.

This is GREAT!

ack, that doesn't look so good, since I resized it... it was nicer before!!!

Yeah... a doodle...

okay

It didn't really move me, I thought it was slightly detatched, and so I thought this was not very emotional, although you do have some things in there, such as ...

(Oh, sorry!) "Sounds good!" she replied, grinning brightly at him, "So, what are the food and water supplies, and what's written in the captain's log?" "Uh..." Just then, a female ...

okay, and thanks, I asked my friend's mom (who teaches art about it and she thought it was ok.. Also, unfortunately, I seem to have lost the original... Ah, well, ...

Sorry, but I cant figure out this new

OOC: sorry! been busy (doing my summer reading)

I liked it a lot, my only problem was the line "Where told was tales" I think it should be "Where told were tales" but that's only my little pet ...

Name: Eruasi Age: 18 Gender: Female Species: Water elf (powerful swimmer; has gills and pointed ears) Weapons: Glaive, bare hands and teeth Powers(if any): can swim under water for long ...