Karma

((OOC: That's great! Do you know Japanese? If you do, that's cool, languages are fun! I know French, Italian, and Spanish)) Ayda and Yeng, meanwhile, were enjoying staying at the ...

Haha! Ask Zel to tell me who I am, if you don't remember, but wen I saw you i never would've guessed that you could write that!

I seem to like all of your stories... Keep up the good work!

Me like! by the ay... Spell check, anyone? just kidding, but not really :D

I liked it a lot, I'm not sure how I missed it before...

great... post this again at valentine's day! :lol: lol

I like it a lot :D

I like it a lot :D

I like it, but it's a solid block of text; you should put spaces in-beween paragraphs, just a little comment, you don't have to follow it or anything :D

Kind of a hard read... my mind was way overloaded with information. Either simplify it or make it llonger. Sorry, i hate being so blunt, but your writing needs a ...

cool. i luv romantic fic, but dont tell Zelithan/zelithon, or shell bug the crap out of me at school :lol: :lots_hearts: :love: :hearts_eyes: :love: :lots_hearts:

((OOC: Sounds great! I'll definately ccheck it out! also, can you ppl spell check, I know I am sort of a hypocrite, but it would be nice :) )) Karma, ...

Good beginning! I like it :D

((OOC: Kinda violent...))

Suddenly, a bright beam of light flasked over him, blinding him. he yelled and rolled off to one side, causing further pain in his abdomen, and, for some reason his ...