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More more more! Please continue before I die of suspense!

Oh my GOD... Short, elegant, humerous, beautiful. I ENVY YOUR TALENT! Tell me I'm beautiful, that was the best part... I mean, all the words... they were pretty... I liked ...

wow. I think that's all that applies. wow.

I'm sure this is a great story...but its red, no capitalization, not enough punctation, no paragraphs. i cannot read one long, uncapitalized, RED story. i know i know im probably ...

Let me say one thing : wow... I am madly jealous of your drawings, I WANNA DRAW LIKE THAT!!! waaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh! well, I guess this is what I get for going ...

**Wait, is this person who we were previously talking about Scott? Or is it just two parallel stories that will at some point converge?**

I like it, no matter how many spelling errors there are, but, I agree with Vampirewolf3 that they are important.

Three days later, he wodered to himself what had posessed him to do what he did. Lara, three miles away, thought I hope I didn't break his heart again!

I like it a LOT!

ooo! i like it a lot! you may want to make the oval a bit less squiggly, but, hey, that's just me.

I really really really like 8 and 9

Well, I guess he isn't really a moron, in the usual sense of the word, since he works for...

So...yeah, This is a storybook that I'm not even going to start, let first come and first serve do whatever you will (that's not mean to anyone/stuff like that)

I am enjoying this a comments/criticisms at the present time.

I really like this, encore, encore!