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Re: Romantic fantasy
Overall, I think your story is really good (the beginning at least). Maybe a little more emotion and details about this Cassius guy would be better. Not to burst your ...
Jan 30, 2009
Overall, I think your story is really good (the beginning at least). Maybe a little more emotion and details about this Cassius guy would be better. Not to burst your ...
Jan 30, 2009
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