Karina

]In like 3 days i will be posting a short fantasy story that i got an A on in language arts so plz read![/color][/color]

I don't know if this story is good enough for a second post!? but i guess i sorta have to.

And thanks for your advice bro! =) good luck on ur story btw! :smt003

I'm really sorry for all the mistakes. It is confusing when like me people forget to write in first person. But I need some advice on something. I was wondering ...

Thanks you guys! That really helps! I love hearing some constructive criticism. I also hope to keep writing! These friends are real and we are really close. There amazing people ...

Sorry guys if i messed it up a little. This is the first time I have used this website for writing something! When I said Gorge Maison I meant to ...