Kanade

A nice poem! You chose the white rhyme, however, white rhyme doesn't mean that the words shouldn't resonate with each other. Try to make the overall stanza structure pattern similar. ...

It's kind of my view of this music piece , wrote it while listening to it, and also figured that the font added to the mood of the poem, so ...

Hello! I'd like to ask, do you review fanfiction novels? I posted the first chapter, and since it kinda contains nothing from the series it's based on (it's an original ...

Hey once again! (if you remember be, that is :) ) It's been a while since my last YWS forum visit! Do you still accept review requests? I started writing ...

Your rhyme pattern kind of bugs me. You rhyme the each last two lines but leave the first two ones without any rhyme at all. It doesn't sound poetic and ...

Actually I 100% agree with the previous reviewer. It doesn't really sound like a poem. It sounds more like your chaotic thoughts that exist in your head because you're confused. ...

This is a fanfiction story/novel basedo on a manga series called "Dolls". I'm not sure if I'll be posting the next chapters here, but since this is my VERY first ...

The Series of Unfortunate Events. They killed it when they made the movie. Absolutely agree with that. Also, yes, Harry Potter movies.. The first two very pretty good, but then ...

This is the very first poem I've ever written, so it's definitely not the best and definitely far from being good. Unfortunately, at that time I focused more on the ...

Hi! I've already gotten some reviews, but I've read your previous ones and they're really great. Would you might checking out my poems? I'm a total newbie in this sphere, ...

I'm sorry I don't remember all the haiku requirements, know it all only in general, but I love haiku and I love your haiku. Especially the fourth one. Technically I'm ...

It depends really. I listen to classical music when working on something for school, aka essays, diploma, research work, etc. My choice is: Ravel, Rachmaninoff, Saint-Saiens, Gershwin, and opera Carmi

6.8/10 Sounds strong!^^

8/10 Dreamy cartoon-ish avvy, enough said.

LP's one of my most favourite bands, but their latest album is sorta... generic. Ian's been claiming that they've become unique at last, but I don't see that claimed individuality ...