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Re: Wanderer
Hi Perdido, I shall keep myself at respectable distance as I'm not familiar with your story, or lots of your poetry or Norwegian Wood (though Murakami is wonderful). I thought ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: sunday spices
lololololololololol. how dare you deface my review.
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: sunday spices
Penezenka, I said I'd review one of your things and boom! Here I am. We all know you can twirl us into a colourful and image-filled frenzy, flow is lovely ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Kiss the Sound of Losing Face
Hi Dreameh. Ack. Kiss the sound of losing face. Taste it on the tip of your tongue These lines have so much potential in the mist of so little. Two ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
4/10 Reconnect - The Directors Sitting on the Dock of the Bay - Otis Redding Don't Know Why - Norah Jones Every Night My Teeth Are Falling Out - The ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Paper Cups
Re: Benway Suit yourself. I never said I didn't like the piece though I sugar coated absolutely nothing you, but if you wish to toss aside the constructive criticism I ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Paper Cups
Hi Benway, rather then having to clarify all this lovely information after, we should have come away with a clear understanding of the more important parts of your poem in ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Pizarro
Karzkin, as promised. I'm conflicted about this piece, and this piece itself is as conflicted as the Spaniards and Incas (but not in a good, I intended this to be ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: unnamed
Hi AM, what this suffers is iamtryingtobedeepandfailing Syndrome. Just because you're dressing your words up like puppets doesn't give the poem itself anymore depth. when the blind follow the deaf ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: YWS Radio Is Back On August 27th
I think the next show tomorrow should be humor based. If y'know what I mean YWS. ;D 8D Just as a quick note, the show tomorrow may not happen. Hurricane ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Ghost Towns and Kansas City, MO
There’s a cemetery down the way, a couple metres wide and a couple more long. The only good thing about this place is the ghost with the most irritating mannerisms. ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: seven headed breakup poem
Alrighty perdido c: Interesting, you've got such a particular style it's hard not to enjoy it. It's got some flaws due to my own taste but this is swell. I ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Butterflies
Hi Mikko, as requested, and you are my 350th review that I should have gotten ages ago. This is less poetry then it is a inner dialogue. It's dull, evokes ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Love's Introspection
Hi Suzanne, nice to see you around again. This is dull and the words don't have the strength to drive in the meaning you took time to carefully explain afterwards. ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Starlight > you'll have to use an image program on the web like tinypic or imageshack. Once you've uploaded it, get the direct link and copy paste into the textbox. ...
Aug 25, 2011
