Kamas

Welcome! If you have any questions or are in need of a critique, drop me a line. Kamas

This ought to be interesting. -- Name: Valentina "Tina" Odelle Age: 23 Gender: Female Appearance (After Mutation): Personality: Valentina is a sweet young woman with a gentle sense of humour ...

I'd read it no matter what really xD Just highlights of the site I guess. Maybe fantastic pieces that have been posted over the last little while? Kamas

Hi there FazoliMoli123, I'll be your reviewer for the moment. First things first, grammar. Imagine yourself an editor, working on piece #2346 of the day. Seeing a lack of capitalized ...

I'll have -- Awww. EDIT: Hahaha. 52132. EDIT #2: Dang it! EDIT #3: I win!

Very well Helpful, my friend. I shall not be merciful considering my birthday is in April. ;) Now this is an interesting idea, it has yet to bear fruit though. ...

That's so creepy on so many levels.

Hi Matt, here as asked. My first suggestion would be to let the reader figure out what message you've left for them in this poem. The idea is not buried ...

Hey Kylan. Here I am. Now this is good, better then most things lurking in these forums but this isn't your best by far. The whole thing is just long ...

Oh wow hun. I'm not sure what provoked you to write this, but it sure made me smile. Thank you for making my day a little brighter. Kamas

I'm going to say this is finished and over. This is a great spot to end it. Thanks all, and keep an eye out for another storybook, I may make ...

So, to drop a note. You don't have to take what I say into full account considering my lack of expertize in this. But here we go: #1. You said ...

Hi Sarah. Welcome to YWS. My suggestion to you before I even consider to review this is proper grammar. i want to tel i am thinkin about u Really? To ...

A/N: Trying to get out of a writing rut so it's not as good as I hoped. If I made a mistake in my Latin, I apologize. -- Confess to ...

It's weird not seeing purple and blue dotting the site.