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(Thanks you two. I appreciate the comments.) #3. [ Feel Good Inc. - Gorillaz ] (Why I can't get anything good down is beyond me) Those wind-catcher sails, angled over ...

Alright, now that I have some time. The first stanza and the 'bottleneck' stanza are very strong. If you take the time to read the parenthetical dialogue and the dialogue ...

murgh, bit of a shaky start. I'll get into stride soon enough.

Yum yum, I can't wait to read through this thread. Great start Kylan.

Congrats Trident! Remember that you did the work, the only one that can really make you improve is yourself. All the very best with your future writing endeavors.

#2. [ Mercy - One Republic ] spheres formed from viridescent baby fists attached to its mother's jointed bloodline like a weak link of fetus walls, braiding itself into the ...

Canada represent! :D These are still really impressive stats.

I shall review this. Quite amazing, thank you.

#1. [ Unwritten - Natasha Bedingfield ] the countryside road, a two furrowed path that runs by the willow tree like an overturned bowl of clay running through the branches. ...

You have to PM Nate for that. But remember that it isn't his first priority, and you should give him some time. Also, I believe that everyone has to be ...

Y'all just got RickRoll'D!

Using an IMG code. If you have a Photobucket account, once you upload it you want to click Share > Get Link Code > IMG for bulletin boards & forums ...

I'm going to give this a shot, taking it easy, one poem everyday. I don't expect much from myself, but it would be nice to get something out of this. ...

O.o What do you spend your time youtubing is my biggest concern at the moment.

That's alright. ;D T'was just a thought.