Kamas

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Only because you asked so nicely, (I'm sorry I'm so late on this) taking the poem I know you did and looking at it in comparison. You haven't done well ...

Demi

Your framing is awful in the first picture, and gives us a level eye view of what is happening so it is moreso documenting rather then photography. There's a distinct ...

10/21/11 Sylvia Plath ~ Lady Lazarus I have done it again. One year in every ten I manage it-- A sort of walking miracle, my skin Bright as a Nazi ...

Any political system is excellent in theory (depending on your viewpoint). In application, all extremes are unstable whether it be fascism or communism. As reference: As a personal opinion, I ...

10/17/11 Louise Glück ~ Vespers In your extended absence, you permit me use of earth, anticipating some return on investment. I must report failure in my assignment, principally regarding the ...

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Hi Dreaming Forever, I'm just tossing you a quick note that you've overexposed and over saturated your photographs. Exposure: Over exposure can be nice in some cases, like certain black ...

Hey Karzkin, as kindly requested: I do like your poetry, it's motivated and pushing forward so it reads really quite well. However, it lacks the imagery it needs to prop ...

Lumi, two features, you fancy huh? I enjoyed this more then your other featured, in fact this is probably a favourite of yours. It's personable and quirky without highlighting that ...

Hi Horizon, I was using teenage romance as an example of something overused in poetry. Not as pertaining to your poetry.

That's odd! Instead try using a photo server like Imageshack and upload your picture there. Once it's uploaded, copy the image location and paste it into a text box and ...

Hey Teresa, Before I even read the poem, let me say: So, I suck at rhyming. But I love poetry. That is why I write prose poetry. It's my first ...

Hi there Horizon, Criticism is welcome, I wish to improve. This is a writing forum, after all, is it not Indeed it is, but if you're posting here it means ...