Kamas

I died at twenty. Good day to you all.

Hi Ducky. This seems to be an angsty pondering of a teenager. In stop and go traffic. I jerked from generic idea to generic idea. So your a girl who ...

Hi Sarah! This is really nice, you have some smooth pencil strokes, but I'm going to be a little bit nitpicky: His extremities seem to be condensed. And it's bothering ...

Kamas Check out my earlier comments regarding the temperment of my sheep =) I am very much aware of the tendencies of these creatures. However, this is where the irony ...

Hi Maybe! As usual your work is gorgeous! :) I'm thoroughly impressed by your work every time. #1. The shadow removes some emphasis on the lizard, because the left side ...

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Hi Embee! These are really really nice! First one: You need to straighten out the horizon just an itty bit. Ever so little so it's straight and doesn't cut off ...

Ah finally something I can enjoy

Hi Fixed! Well, that was an interesting article, where's the poem? There's no imagery, at all. I'm pretty sure none of us can imagine a baby being dropped from a ...

Hi! I think this is the second piece of yours I'm at >.> First I'll start by being honest and found this vaguely amusing. All around me there is writing ...

Hi Hib! Well, finally someone has incorporated some sort of substantial imagery. I'm bordering on having my brain explode from the lack of it. So thank you for that. You ...

Alright, what are we getting, milk and tomatoes? Seriously, this is a grocery list of wants/feelings. I want this, I want to feel that. Blahblahblah. It gets dull really quickly. ...

So basically, in 33 lines you basically say: I have to see you again. x3 I'd hope that in 33 lines you'd get a much more powerful message instead of ...

Hi Screamandshout! I had a review ready for this last night, but I fell asleep before I could post it. I decided to rewrite the review instead of giving you ...

You can edit it at anytime now! So simply go to My YWS > Profile and you scroll down until you see Custom Title and a blank space. You can ...