Kamas

I really liked that and dont hav much to say about it actually I agree with tori1234 the flow is lost in the first stanza but u pick it up ...

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I sorrta get where you are going with this... This is a really dark poem so watch your wording The imagery you give is cold, dark, and gloomy (if that's ...

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Ok this is really good. The rhyme is solid all the way through the subject is grim but i think its brilliant! The piece is about the grim reaper and ...

Ok for someone who hasn't written in a while it is really really really good. You have a pattern going but it isn't necessarily rhyme (there are some rhymes in ...

Ok this is really good there are a few loose ends to tighten up but its really good. The rhyming scheme goes off once and a while but the is ...

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