Kamas

Hi there! Quite a nice poem! I enjoyed it. The biggest thing that bothered me: The abuse of the ellipsis (the ...) I don't really mind it in poetry but ...

Hi there! Lovely poetry dear! It has very nice imagery! Very nice. My biggest problem with this right now is the fact that there no punctuation in the poems at ...

Rosey is right. It's something people do not really pay attention too. I'm pretty sure they've learnt it, it's just not something that comes to mind when you are writing. ...

I hate to say I have never read it. Why are you nervous though? Just read it, if you don't like it put it down and move on. If you ...

Very nice. Very very nice. This poem has a nice message to it. Some suggestions: 1) This poem is a bit of a huge run-on sentence. There is only a ...

Oh Hawkie no reviews? Well let's change that! I loved the first one and this one was lovely too. Suggestions: 1) For people who don't know the story of Link ...

Hi there Dream! I'm Kamas here to review. I really enjoyed your poem, it was quite nice. Somethings I noticed: Flow It seems to me that the flow in this ...

Lovely! Just lovely Aqua! This poem had such beautiful imagery! I adored it. A planted seed, A trail of doubt, A whispered secret That was never let out. This was ...

Charlie: I believe that you're reviews were not long enough the be considered reviews. A review must be at least 50 characters long. I think you must also use your ...

Becki! *tackles* Boston is lovely! I'd love to visit! As usual your picture are very pretty. Well taken. They seem to be very tourist like shots rather than photography. The ...

Krissy shivered, she hated that man to the pits of her lonely soul. Why was she so nervous though. Resting her head on Maria's shoulder, Krissy whispered, " We're amateur ...

Griery: (The Rouge) (Underground Court) The Rouge frowned, he disliked it when people did not like his ideas. "Daniel is a threat to this court Lorraine. Even though he is ...

By 15 year old. I meant she has the limited vocabulary of a child with a dictionary beside them. They find a smart looking word, write it down to look ...

Bliss by Lauren Myracle This book was addicting and gave my the shivers. It's got some gore, a little accidental murder and some ghosts of dead school girls. Give it ...

I definitely agree with some posters here. Sarah Dessen is a very good romance novelists. I adore all her stories. I also suggest: The Memoirs of a Teenage Amnesiac By: ...