Kamas

Hey Pudin :D Here as requested! Lovely poem, such length always impresses me. Demeter has gone over like everything. So mine will seem like repetition to you, but I'll try ...

:O People went all out here! Wow-y. Lovely Incog! Unfortunately I do not know how to do that marvelous colouring so I'll have to type up my suggestions: Face -- ...

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Krissy: (Later) Krissy tossed and turned, her calm expression flickering to different emotions. With a groan she awoke, a headache pounding against her skull. She lift off the covers and ...

Hi there! Kamas here for another quick review before I run off to bed. As Conrad said, your poem was right on the line of what I like to call ...

Krissy: I opened my eyes slowly, and smiled weakly at both of them. Daniel scrambled over, "Are you feeling better?" "Better than before but not as good as I wan' ...

The Rogue: "Well my friends. Kayla I believe has accomplished a great deal last night. The home they were spotted in was burned down too the ground. Only ashes remain, ...

Okay. It may just be me. Sorry then. Good Job though. ~Kamas

Hi everyone! Critique's for everyone! One and all! What I critique: All poetry (Narrative, Dramatic, Lyrics and Other) Artwork and Photography Other (most things) What I do not critique: Long ...

Krissy: I could smell heavy smoke as it crawled up my nostrils. I tried to get up but spikes of pain shot through my body and unconsciousness weighed heavy on ...

I can very well see it as a pop song but it immediately reminded me of the song "Feel the Beat" The problem with lyrics is that you have to ...

Love, you keep bumping this thread when you were asked by a moderator not too. And though you are asking for more and more reviews your tone to the more ...

Lovely! The filter you used makes the colours very vibrant and beautiful. Also the scene itself is very nice. I suggest cropping it just a little bit. A teeny teeny ...

** Note: Gryk is dead because Firefox gave up his character to Crocky and she did not want this character anymore.** Krissy: I stared down at Gryk's corpse contemplatively. His ...

Hi Demi! I need this reviewed before I can hand it in on Tuesday. Give me a hand please? Thanks so much :smt001