Kamas

I must say, I quite enjoyed this. Your ability to create imagery is great and obvious. The one things that I see as a big problem is that you turned ...

Hey Neverending. You lack some reviews so I'll give you a hand ^^ My biggest problem here is the rhyming, I have a dislike for rhyming. It cuts off so ...

I repeat what Snoink said too. You are telling us what the storm can't do, staying in the negative state gets boring. Much too boring :wink: Also, by telling us ...

Krissy I sat in the throne, legs hanging over the side and my fingers tapping nervously. People had come in and out of the Court, either for a challenge or ...

Typical Canada. In third yet again. :P Sigh, I know Rosey. EDIT: I see my house from here! =D

Hi Kat! Kamas here. Unfortunately, your poem is a weaving of cliched line after cliched line. I hate to be harsh, but it's the truth, all these lines are nothing ...

Krissy I smiled grimly at my friend, pushing hair out of her face. "We beat 'em Maria, he's dead. Kayla's gone, Lorraine's dead too." I said. Daniel flinched at the ...

Do as Snoink said and post it in the forum, we don't bite. I think I'll give a few more tips before I go my way. There are techniques that ...

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Of course she'd be the one to de-throne me :D *runs around look for her head* Congrats dear!

Why does the Cheshire cat has a mustache? Lawl.

*flexes muscles and shows off gladiator sword* Or the FBI determines it after tracking you for weeks. Nah, I believe its if you are consistently helpful around the site, have ...

*saves screenshot forever and ever*

Thank you!

Oo! In this :) Name - Hazel Sophia Dorian Age - 21 Gender - Female Personality - Hazel is quiet and bitter, she has a sharp tongue that causes most ...