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Though I'm not a big fan of rhyme, this was well done. Nelson Mandela is a hugely respectable man and I/m happy to see a poem about him. My biggest ...

Hazel She could feel her tears evaporating off her cheeks. She knew she was a bad person, but never believed in Hell. "I can't believe I'm ... dead." she said, ...

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Dang it, I'm hungry.

Hazel "I'm dead, but I don't know." she responded delicately. He jumped up and backed away from the erupting smoke. Hazel was now completely bewildered, she followed the man. "What ...

Here, I'll give you a hand to start this thing. I'm going to assume Hazel just died and is waking up in hell. :wink: -- Hazel Hazel moaned and rolled ...

I do not bite! D: I chew.

First post! Eek! Welcome to YWS darling! If you need help, there are somethings I can give you a hand with. I suggest you visit : Answers to Questions Everyone ...

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Welcome back everyone!

Hi Cosby. I wouldn't trust Jigs, he bites from behind. Well, I adore horses too! Yay =D I ride in France and I love all the horses there to death. ...

This was nicely done, short but sweet in a way. I like the use of the imagery of the dream sinking into the pond, very well done. Tennis is right ...

I'm not sure what you're trying to get across here. As well as your lack of structure seems distracting. As Aussie said, show don't tell. So she wears jean, a ...

I always enjoy Poe's work, but this one isn't my favourite. It doesn't seem as top notch as the rest. I think your right about the bells Nate, they seem ...

I really love how you have these motivations behind this poems that you write, it's very sweet and I think you deserve a tip of the hat for it. It's ...