Kamas

Reminds me too much of the 'rock' songs of today. Yes girl overlooked boy, boy gives her a chance to redeem herself and she throws it away missing a great ...

Hi, this has a nice little beat that I might consider more for lyrics. These could possibly be lyrics too. But as Amy said, the last two stanzas put it ...

Hey there. Well, this isn't a strong poem in my books. It's cute, yes. But good consistent poetry? Not really. It's a good start though, you just need a little ...

As said above. These lines are hollow, no substance. A lot of it has to do with your threadbare wording and metaphors/similes. You use the kind of words that are ...

Hey there. Your poem is the typical teenage angst/rant one. There really isn't anything original about it, just a slightly different way of saying the exact same thing. Plus your ...

Hi there. I'm going to make this short and sweet, you don't have to take anything I say into account as I'm nearly incoherent from lack of sleep and in ...

This wasn't as exciting as I thought it would be D: I was hoping for a toe race. Psh, this is the internet. No room for running! Did I mention ...

Banned for letting this banning chain go on for too long!

I like All Time Low toooo! Cool beans! Welcome to YWS! We must share bands ^^

My eyes are real? D: How will I see? Twilight o.o Please god no.

Roar! Mah eyes: (no my skin is not that pale, it's just the light)

Fluorescent Adolescent - The Arctic Monkeys xD No problemo

Banned for confusing me more by banning me in the wrong thread Beat me to the post D: Banned for doing so

Banned for not having seen the Dark Knight D:

Blood red >8D