Kamas

8/10 it's a little blurry D:

A rushed mess if you ask me, I'll stick to poetry.

Day Dreams is correct, wrong forum my dear. You probably want to go to the Entertainment forum Link: Entertainment Forum

Teehee! *posts 1000 random epilogues*

Hi Lily. The repetition in this poem is awkward and annoying. It's much too forced for the poem to breath and live. You've throttled your conventional idea with awkward, unflowing ...

Oh dear Forest. This is terribly generic (in a different way then the others think) and by no means matches up to your other poems. The lines are threadbare and ...

I like the childish note you have in this because bullying in this context happens to children. Your words are generic but I guess its acceptable because a child can't ...

Hi there. Well, though you edited it. It still completely lacks originality, the 'I am your life, your love.' thing is too overused and has been overused since the troubadours ...

You pulled the extreme repetition off well enough here, though it did get boring after a while. But that's the problem with repetition in general, and such a huge amount ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS. The deteriorating extended metaphor you did was well presented but unoriginal. Love to Death, yup, not very original. It's just the idea itself that is ...

Snoink's evil bidding?

10/10

9/10 very fun :D New avatar for me!

Very very cute Amy. :) Though I find it quite cliche with the sun-kissed petals and all that it gave me a little sigh of happiness. The rhyming was done ...

Onyx, you my dear deserve some reviews. Though I can't say I liked the poem, it was better done then I expected. You're wording makes me happy, most of the ...