Kamas

Hi Howler. Amy is right, stop asking questions. Asking a question in a poem is okay moderately, but if each stanza has/is a question, the reader has to stop. It ...

Oh my god, I finally get to see what Shina looks like!

Oh noes! I had to redo a review? D: I'll be nicer this time. I'll post it in a sec.

Hi Fixed, Thought I'd drop a review while I'm at it. I'm tired and not in the greatest mood, so I warn you ahead of time. A poem about relationships/cheating? ...

Hi there. I find your writing has a lot of potential Oza (if you don't mind me calling you that.) I like the knitting of the words and how you ...

Aw D: To Adrian: Means I'm not 18 or in the United States XD

This is well done on a one-dimensional state. Otherwise these are just hollow lines, nothing but empty space behind them. The only thing that catches your reader is the rhyme ...

Hi there, I definitely second Amy that 'holocaust' is an extremely powerful word. Your lack of follow up on that shows me it was just a flash of genius that ...

Hi Red, As Amy said you've used half rhymes. Which I personally prefer over full rhymes but shhh. Though you use half rhymes it still feels forced when you read ...

Hi there. I would try to do several haikus, rather then just one. Because I personally find these three lines rather boring. There is no story, no language that can ...

Hi Vampy. Well the idea is nice, not exactly what I perceive as 'original' due to all of the creation stories in all sorts of religions. But I suppose you ...

Hi there. Well, I'm a little torn over this poem. The idea is really great but the way you did it was forced (the rhyme). You have a good use ...

Hi there! Well, you've got some decent imagery but it's too basic to really take us anywhere and give us something to shape and mold to our ideal. A rock, ...

Hi there! This was nice, just ugh, I've seen this to many times and it seemed to me it would work more for lyrics rather then poetry. It sort of ...

Why are you people so pretty -.-