Kalliope

Hey CK, here's a crit for the next two chapters! Comments and changes are inside. I really loved chapter seven, while chapter six was okay, but somehow a bit boring, ...

Hi there! Um actually I was reminded of the song Up! by Shania Twain. The chorus and the title are somewhat similar, but onto this song. This is a good ...

Known for having a good taste in quotes. I love the one in your signature.

Hey lyrical_sunshine, I've wanted to read some of your work for quite a bit and it was absolutely worth it. I absolutely loved this and don't really have any suggestions ...

Choco! Here's a crit for your song :) Hmmm, I liked your imagery when you wrote about standing on top of a building and all that. In this part here: ...

Goodness, I owe you, this took forever! First of all I must say that your writing is amazing and this was a very enjoyable read. Part One The ring felt ...

Haha, go hide, she's back! *evil laugh* Nah, I like the changes you've made so far. Some small suggestions/ comments: " I hate this . No matter what I do ...

Iliad OR Oddessy - I forgot who they were by. I think his name was Poe or something. The old Greek stuff? That's Homer . No, not Homer Simpson! Another ...

Aww, and I got kicked and had to turn off the computer right when the fun started. But thanks for posting this, Mesh!

Whee *high fives* During summer I shall read. >Wicked >Sophie's World (this is loong over-due) >Phantom of the Opera >Shadow of the Wind >Small Steps (sequel to Holes) >The Historian ...

Hokey-dokey, I've finished it! I actually liked it quite a lot. Most things I change or was picky about were precision in language and diction. Sometimes, because I was just ...

Whoo, I finally finished the first few chapters! I'm sorry it took me so long... Anyway, on the first page or so I basically picked out anything that was not ...

Done! I have time now, so if you want a crit you won't have to wait that long ;)

Raise a white flag and offer bananas? What would you do if the earth was flooded?

Hi there, welcome to YWS! I hope you have great fun here and get loads of good tips. Also as choco said reviewing is a good thing. It helps you ...