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Hey Janey, too bad no one's critiqued this yet. =( This piece has a good flow, as I didn't stumble over anything while reading. That's a very good thing, because ...

Okay, this thing is up again and I'd love to do some crtiques. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things and now that my Christmas break has ...

Hi Poetic Glow, I must say that I enjoyed reading this very much. It sad, but not in a too heavy way. Coping with emotions through poetry is always good, ...

Hey, I absolutely loved this. I'm usually not big on fantasy, but I really wanted to read Scavenger and I am very glad I started to do so. As I ...

Hi Poetic Glow, this is a neat poem you have here. It didn't blow me off my feet, admittedly, but I thought it was nice. There are one or two ...

Hello guitargrl1323, you have a good start here. Relatable theme, no obvious mistakes, but I think you could work on this some more and it could be really good. Punctuation ...

Hi sheepy.shoo, first of all: Welcome to YWS. If you love writing and want to share your work with others you are at exactly the right place. There are a ...

Gee, thank you for that critique. I was just planning to get into this project again now that NaNo's done. Yes, there will be a few more parts, but I ...

Oh, good! That should ensure that more people stick to the rule. Sad, that you actually have to make people stop using it, for they should see that no one ...

XD Sometimes I'm worried about Joy's mental health ... Orion, can you help me? Look. There’s this guy… Yeah, I bet you here this kind of thing loads of times, ...

Hello lordgluzman, I really like the flow you have to this song, it was easy to read wothout knowing the music. Also I like how "round" your song is in ...

Hello there, first of all I'd like to welcome you to this wonderful, wonderful site. I'm sure you'll love it and learn loads about writing. Considering your set of lyrics ...

Thank goodness, not everyone's so tremendously far ahead of me. I'm a little over 5 K, but I think I'll get a large bit done today, so there's hope. =)

Guess who got some extra sleep last night and finished her first chapter before breakfast! Count: 1.613 But, I shall try to get another 1.500 or so in today. Happy ...

Banned for ignoring capital letters.