Kalliope

6/10

Hi, beware, it's me ... again. :D Wow, I really like this the way it is now. Very well written, the description is marvelous and the flow is amazing. Also ...

Done. :D Anyone else?

Hi Kirsten, since you asked for an overall opinion rather than nitpicks I'll skip those. But I'd look at the tenses again in places. Just something I noticed once or ...

It is absolutely on my "To Read List", but I haven't read it yet. I did however see a series on television, which gave me the impression that it is ...

I've read all three of them in German and I thought they were amazing. The two that play in the Inkworld are a whole lot darker and all, but I ...

Just Go It’s not time for arguments It’s all been said before don’t you bother telling me I’ll be cryin’ soon -- Just go Oh, choke on your apologies quit ...

Hi Incognito Temptation, welcome to YWS! I love your avatar by the way, it's really cute. I hope you have a great time around here and get a chance to ...

Hey Meow, that's certainly no name I've heard for a wolf before. But one of our budgies named "Mr. Meyer", hence I love names that seem a bit odd. Yay! ...

Hi Claire Suzanne, I must say, I love your name! Welcome to YWS from me as well. Since pretty much everything has been explained already I get the pleasurable job ...

I was just wondering today whether there would be another one or not. I am very excited that there is. I got the first edition for Christmas (Better late than ...

Are there still any left? If yes, I hope we have US stamps, otherwise I guess I'll ask my grandparents to send an envelope. Then I'll have my sticker in ...

Hi, your welcome for the crit. You're doing an amazing job at taking the advice given and editing your work. You're so fast! I don't really have much time now, ...

Hey there, that's a good start you've got there. I enjoyed reading it and you have a very nice flow. :roll: Nitpicks -- I know, annoying, so let's get this ...

Hi adi, this is a nice set of lyrics you have here. Relatable theme, good length. Neat. I do however have a few tips for you: 1) Repetition -- Repetition ...