Kalliope

Hey Just_Listen, welcome to YWS! Glad to see you found your way here. I'm sure the site will help you improve your writing and you probably have some great advice ...

Hey there, I'm glad you're happy about the song you wrote, that's the most important thing. You have great flow here and I'm sure it goes wonderfully with the music. ...

Hey June, thought I'd review something of yours. =) This was rather short, even for a short piece, however you managed to create a constant air of fear and not ...

Hey there, this is actually rather nice for a second song. =) I did however notice that you do a lot of rhyming, which doesn't necessarily help the flow. It ...

Hey Snoink, this is going to be a brief one, but I thought you may like to hear another opinion. I didn't like this as much as your usual writings, ...

Hey Ducati, I love the idea of your song. Very sweet and lovely, indeed. You have a neat flow and your description is wonderful. One or two small things: 1) ...

Hey little_miss_obsessed, glad you're writing lyrics. They're a fun medium to express yourself just as much as to communicate a message to others. You have a lovely approach here, nice ...

Done. Anyone else?

I would probably pick this one up, because the title immediately draws me in. Sounds like a rather calm story where one has to cope with the past and perhaps ...

Hey there, I'm sorry, this took forever, but now I'm here, so I hope you'll forgive me for letting you wait for such a long time. Preface: I thought the ...

Hey beemarie, catching up on the story again. As in the last chapters your description was wonderful and stylistically I think you are doing very well. I enjoy reading your ...

Makes me think about a mistreated child, maybe locked away in a basement or something. Other than that doesn't raise too many ideas. I would probably read the blurb (depending ...

Hi Ducati, sorry for the delay, but here's your review, as promised. Generally I liked you idea and Janey seems a very sweet little girl. I felt for her. However ...

Finished. =)

Hey Demeter, here's your crit as promised. For you, always. However I fear that I'm not going to be a whole lot of help with this, especially not on the ...