Kalliope

I agree that it is not unique and a little too cliché in some places, but I think all in all it's okay. Anyway there are a few things I ...

[Note: I wrote this some time ago and I'm not too sure about it, so please tell me what you think!] Loving you in vain I feel bad for shutting ...

Definetly! I think turning away is a very good description, because when you turn away at the sight of someone screaming for help that means you're not planning to act, ...

Hey, I like this. It has a nice flow to it and you make your point. Remember the time when we were younger? And we got along so well as ...

This is really beautiful. You seem to paint pictures in the air with your words. Changing views makes it very real and the listener/reader can feel the bitter-sweetness of the ...

I can't wait :D

hey, that's easy!! Linkin park "what I've done" :)

I feel lost inside myself, I don’t know what to do. I thought I was finally healing, now I realize I can’t get over you. I get nervous when I ...

Impressing! I love it. It's smoothe and has original rhymes (not forced or anything) and it really does make you think plus I love dark stuff. Keep on writing!!

PLease tell me what you think!!

Up on the side rail of a bridge is where she stands High above the river of lost dreams Her heart is broken you can see that right away Looking ...

WOW!! I am truly impressed. I'm quite new here, but I've already seen quite an amount of lyrics and this is absolutely the best one!! I mght post one of ...

You have a nice smoothe way of writing, so I think you should definetly finish this, but I think you should repeat yourself a little less and put more new ...

I like the idea of the song and you have a very straight forward way in telling what you think, which is good. But I agree with Lynlyn that it ...

Wow this is really good! There are a few lines that seem a little long, but I love the story. A bit ironic, very sad and I'd say pretty real. ...