Kalliope

I'm not exactly an expert on such things, but to mw YWS has never seemed out of date. I get around well and the format doesn't seem clunky or anything. ...

Hi Adna, I really enjoyed reading this. You have some wonderful images and have created a very sweet poem. I had the same problems with it as Pengu basically. I ...

Hi there :) NOTE: Don't go looking for a meaning in these lyrics; there isn't any. This did not encourage me to read this. Plus I think you really should ...

Whee, this is for the musical you're working on, I take it? *gets excited* I can imagine the secene and I think it'd very well in a musical once you're ...

Hey Choco, I haven't critiqued or written any lyrics in a while, so I'm a bit out of practise, but I thought I'd get back into this business ;) I ...

Hey there, I like your story and you've got some really cute stuff in here, but I also think you need to work on this quite a bit. First of ...

I feel like throwing up at the moment. That is just so awful. This is beyond sick. I just cannot understand people doing this to another. It could have been ...

Aurora Aurora lay in her bed awake, keeping an eye on the clear sky outside. Restlessly she turned from one side to the other, trying to somehow get some sleep. ...

Yeah, I intended to make it seem like she'd broken up with him, so I'm glad it came across that way :) I'm still arguing with myself about the name-thing. ...

Woah. Ouch. Double ouch that is. Poor Lukas... I really love how you described the scene with the roses and all. This part yet again is just plain awsome. Nevertheless ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS :) Great place, really, and if you enjoy poetry you're sure to like it here. :elephant: That one's definetly the best emoticon around :D So ...

Aurora The snow crackled under the coach as it made it's way up the hill, leaving the small town in the valley behind. Aurora sat upright in the back, an ...

I was wondering about that earlier today, but hey I can live with it. Plus I'm happy ;) To join the choir and say what I'm thinking: You rock! So ...

Finally, finally here's your review. :) To take it off him would destroy him . I think it would sound better if you cut out the first 'him'. It would ...

NaPoWriMo? Sounds like a good plan to me. Forces me to practise my poetry skills and that is defnetly something I need. I'm in! :) ...although I doubt I'll post ...