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Hi there again :) Demeter is actually the greek name of the godess of spring and nature. One of the most pleasant godesses I claim. :) Have a lovely day, ...

Banned for having a username I don't get and claiming there's logic to it. ;)

Hi there, I haven't got all that much time, but I thought I'd give you a quick review since nobody else has yet. For a first song this is definetly ...

Hi OverEasy, I've been wanting to critique some of your writing for quite some time and I thought starting here may be good. I enjoyed reading these lyrics and other ...

Hi there Demeter! *huggles new member* I'm sure you'll have loads of fun at this site. I really like your name. Do you study Latin by any chance or how ...

Thank you for sharing this advice, Snoik! I'm currently trying to improve my character developing skills and have had some trouble giving them good flaws and not just the average ...

I will survive - Gloria Gaynor

Hey there Cassie! 'Lainna beat me to complementing you on your title, but I guess that's a good thing ;) Navigating around this place can be difficoult at first, but ...

Hi Dreamer, I really enjoyed reading this. The dream is kind of cheesy, but I suspect you were attempting that and the ending was fun. I do have a slight ...

Banned for missing an "i".

This is disgusting, infurigating and sad. Really makes you wonder what is wrong with peoples minds. It has long been known that humans are capeable of the worst things, which ...

I disagree. Letting them being beaten up for beating this girl is a contradiction in terms. Yes, they should be tried and punished as adults. They are old enough to ...

Wow. You did an amazing job at conveying your main character's emotions and I had tears in my eyes when I'd gotten to the end of this piece. Sentimental, I ...

Hi Sam, I absolutely love this. Your wording is colorful and you sent me to the dictionary a various amount of times to look things up, but I always found ...

Hi Cade, poetry is one of the things I know little to nothing about, but I enjoyed reading yours. I think I'll just go ahead and comment a little, but ...