Kalliope

Ahhh, yes, the Niagara Falls... I still remember them from when I was there as a little kid. They are really something. Wonderful picture, really. Great how you caught the ...

Hi socunfused, I need to agree with Vernon on this one. Please use punctuation to make your work more tidy and attractive for the reader and also help you to ...

Very cute idea and I liked the way you lined up all the different cliches. Just one or two little nitpicks: Gazing at the stars, and think ing of you. ...

Hi Because :), welcome to the site. I really enjoyed reading this. Very unique. There are three places I'd change just to help the flow. They've already been pointed out ...

Hey OverEasy, you seem to know something about poetry, so you'd make me really happy if you'd take a look at this: I think I may need some help. Just ...

Okay, the edits are finally made. If you want to take a look at the original version, open the spoiler at the bottom. Happy Birthday The candles burn for you, ...

I'd definetly take a closer look at this one. Makes you stop and think Wait. Isn't that the same thing? The apples of Eden

Hey Demeter, I thought this was cute although it didn't blow me off my feet admittedly I enjoyed the read. The last stanza was very unexpected which was good after ...

Hey New Writer! Don't be upset if you don't get so many critiques. You can always ask for some help in the Will review for food section or in the ...

Hey Demeter! This was really neat! Quirky, to steal 'Lainna's words :D A few suggestions: Like, who does she think she is, [s]anyway[/s]? In my eyes the anyway kind of ...

Hey there, Demeter! Here's the crit I promised :) [I'm not all that good with non-fiction, though.] Not the most tactless thing to say, and I'm still not sure if ...

We're lucky to have you, Adam, to save the image of your name ;) I sent an e-mail. Hope everyone else does as well. ~Kalli

Okay, here's the rest. :) Siren 2: Oh sister, dear , I don't sing for me. The third “sister dear” seems to be a bit much, so maybe replace that ...

I got one of those earlier today. Tell me if I need to send you a copy or anything. Hope we can get rid of him soon. ~Kalliope

Hey Heather, Siren 1: Dear sister - look at me - let me speak, on matters of the heart. I think you'll find I have some wisdom to impart. Siren ...