Kalliope

Hey OverEasy, sorry to bug you again, but I could really use your help with this. Thank you! If there's anything you'd like me to look at just tell me. ...

On the verge of tears you stare at the black board. Confusing numbers and equations dancing in front of your nose, clear and cutting words sitting on your mind. You ...

Done. Any other callers?

Don't forget about us - Mariah Carey

Hi Icaruss, here comes your review. Alright, first things first: This was a very hard piece for me to read. Somewhere in the middle of it, I was at the ...

Hi Lizzie! welcome to YWS! Glad you found your way to this awsome site and if you are wanting to improve your writing, get great tipps and feedback, this is ...

Hi Leja, I can't believe it took me so long to get back to this and finally critique it. I absolutely love this. It was a wonderful light read with ...

Hello? You are connected to Kalli's Critique Call Center, how can I help you? ... What I critique? Fiction - I especially have a partial for Romance at the moment, ...

Hey Loose, this was wonderful. You've drawn a beautiful picture; an outside view on the scene and so I can see this working as a prologue very well. View The ...

Haha, that explains a whole lot! Sorry, may just have been me being stupid, but maybe clearing it up would help incase someone else doesn't know. ;)

Hey OverEasy, I must say, I really enjoyed this. I love the way Jordan is a teenage rebel and her entire attitude is refreshing. She's not the stereotype teenage girl. ...

Hey OverEasy, I'm with Jared about the description. I think you have a very solid frame and nice dialog, but you could expand and specify by describing. This could really ...

Thank you for the wonderfully helpful reviews everyone! I shall definetly redo the second part of the first stanza. You've given me sone real brainwaves, Heather (Thanks a ton!) and ...

I was wondering about that aswell...

*pats Meshugenah* I'd reply :D