Kalliope

Hey Rosie, I really liked this. Very wonderful atmospere and I had no problems at all when singing it, which means that your flow is is good and your meter ...

This one is from my NaPoWriMo. I went a little nuts with the line breaks and would like to know what you think of this. Lullaby Raise your voice. Sing ...

Banned for beating me to banning Adam for his five a's.

Banned for me hearing your stomach growl.

Gah, yet again it took me for ever to get back to this, but here I am, so don't hit me ;) Okay, first of all: Hi :D Now on ...

Hey Jared, sorry it took me so long to get to this, school has been eating me. You did a great job at bringing us back into the story and ...

Finally completed. Any more callers?

Aww, sorry for the double post, but I just finished the part about Sarah. This was absolutely wonderful. You'll find some of my nit-picks in the file, but I really ...

Oh my, I'm taking way too much time with this. Anyway I've finished the part about Justin and I shall start Sarah as soon as I've posted it. I just ...

Banned for the heck of it.

That's alright, I'll be the mentor =)

Oh my, I heard it's bad luck to wish a happy birthday early, but I don't really care, so *starts baking muffins* Happy Birthday you two geniuses! ~Kalliope

Here's your crit! Sorry it took me so long... Hope it helps you a little!

Maybe about a solar eclipse or something? Or about something that's the opposite of what it should be. (You know dark and sun, don't really connect, so...) I don't know, ...

Yet again Aurora lied in her bed sleeping. But it was no pleasant sleep. The dream was haunting her again. The one that had come to her every night since ...