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It's pretty insulting how insistent you are on placing your own opinion in my mouth. I am quite capable of expressing my own thoughts, and if I really thought this ...

I wouldn't call this an abomination, and I definitely got vibes of Gilgamesh (which I thought I mentioned in my review but apparently didn't whoops). It's just that I think ...

You're welcome!

You're welcome!

You're welcome. Like I mentioned in my review though, since this is its own chapter, having it all in italics is a bit overkill and makes it so that I ...

Thanks for the review! This is pretty raw and unedited, so please please please point out the other parts you felt were redundant so I can snippity-snip. As for the ...

Thanks for reviewing! Prose poems are really interesting, and I strongly recommend you look into them more. It's one of those transitionary forms between poetry and prose, and the possibilities ...

Oh wow. I was not expecting to get a review on this again. It's so old, but glad you appreciated it. As for the points you recommended expanding on, the ...

Clearly, you are not alone.

My dog was named Harley when he was an adult. He was apparently picked up while wandering by the side of the road, and the first thing he did when ...

Well, most of my concerns were addressed in the next chapter, so it's just something to be aware of for the future.

Well, most of my concerns were addressed in the next chapter, so it's just something to be aware of for the future.

Totally. :P

The issue I mentioned isn't with the dog being there. It's fine that there is a dog. The problem is in how suddenly the dog is introduced and brought into ...

I had no idea English wasn't your native language! You're doing really well, and the mistakes I mentioned are ones native-speakers make all the time, especially when they're trying to ...