Kale

And hello again MrAlwins. I'll be reviewing these next two chapters as well since they've been haunting the Green Room for a while, which is always a sad thing to ...

Hello MrAlwins. Just letting you know that I haven't read the previous chapter, so if I bring up something that was already addressed, feel free to disregard what I said. ...

Hello ryuugan. Before I start the review proper, I'd just like to say that I noticed you currently don't have any reviews to your name, and that one of the ...

Hail Fellow Order member! Hopefully this time a sneaky Rydia will not rob me of a Green Room review. *grumbles and mutters and looks around shiftywise* In any case, the ...

Hail, Fellow Order member! I have come to liberate this forlorn chapter of yours from the Green Room, as is our shared sacred duty! I believe I may have reviewed ...

Hello Serenya. Before I start reviewing this, I feel I should mention that I haven't read the first part to this, mainly because the first part isn't showing up in ...

And it's me again, as promised. Before I get into the review proper, I happened to notice that your review count currently sits at a rather empty zero. One of ...

One of the first things that caught my eye were the oddly-fused words. I'm guessing something happened to your formatting when you pasted this into the submissions editor because your ...

First things first, you really need to separate the numbering for the sections more clearly from the actual poem. I initially thought the Roman numeral one was part of the ...

Hello artemis. I don't believe I've ever read or reviewed any of your chapters before, so if something I mention was addressed earlier in the story, feel free to disregard ...

And hello again. Most of what I said in my previous review applies to this chapter as well, particularly the bits about paragraphing and spelling. With how frequent the spelling ...

First things first: your title has a typo. You really need to fix that, considering it's literally the first thing your readers see, and being unable to spell your own ...

It was unimportant to mention my determination to always be right—after all, I couldn’t afford to lose my façade of being sure about everything. I didn’t need to acknowledge the ...

Oh hello there Aley. I don't think I've had the pleasure of actually reviewing a piece of yours yet (I think we agree the fanfic opinion giving thing doesn't count). ...

Hello again kayfortnight. Seeing as how this has been trapped in the Green Room for a while now, here I am to free it from such non-blue confines. And for ...