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And here I am for the final part. :3 With that said, aaahhh!!! Part 4 spoiled me with the formatting. ;.; You really should consider fixing the formatting up so ...

And back again for Part 4! *cackles with evil glee* But before I actually review anything, I have to say that of all the parts I've read so far, this ...

And here I am again for Part 3. The shrill beeping of my alarm wrenched me violently from my dream world and thrust me head first into reality. The rest ...

Hello again Pigeon. I am going to review every part of this. Every. Part. *insert evil laughter here* With that said, the comma issues I mentioned in my review of ...

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Hello there, Kylan. It's been a while since I've reviewed anything of yours. It might as well be something that hasn't been reviewed yet, yes? The first thing I'll note ...

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And here I am again for Chapter 5. Going back to what I said about extending Chapter 4, since Jack is watching her before she wakes up, rather than extend ...

And back for Chapter 4, as promised. The first thing that really strikes me about this chapter (and the other chapter I just reviewed) is how short they are. These ...