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That summary is pretty confusing, and I'm wondering what you're looking for feedback on. Do you want help improving the summary to make it more interesting, or are you asking ...

I think the trickiest part to overcome in your case is how the pantheon fits in with history since you're writing a contemporary fantasy. A big question your readers will ...

There's also the matter of how Mary was not black, but a Jew. PoC representation is important, but racebending is pretty easily offensive, and often an unnoticed form of erasure ...

I am so sad more people aren't discussing this. So here I am. I love serials and serial writing, and the way I see it, having a serial structure ensures ...

It's very different in tone, but have you ever seen Cute High Earth Defense Club ? If you haven't, I recommend it. It's funny, has a decent plot, some moral ...

Just dropping in to say that cooking oil can absolutely result in fourth-degree burns, depending on the scenario. A scald will probably not result in fourth-degree burns, but if you're, ...

You're welcome!

Well, a good start would be to figure out which tribe or nation you're writing about. There are hundreds, and each of them has their own distinct culture and traditions. ...

This latest draft is much better, and I think you're finally drawing near to the end. Molly wants to spend her summer before college winning the love of Noah. They’ve ...

Try worrying about those things after you complete your first draft. Really. It's a lot easier to see problems (and sometimes solutions) when you're looking at a whole rather than ...

One thing I think that needs to be said is that you should never, ever deliberately delete your writing. Even if it's the worst thing ever written. There's a few ...

How about starting with Brianna's kidnapping?

Have you tried looking at some medieval bestiaries? There's a lot of really weird and fantastic creatures catalogued in them. Here's one online:

Also, if you're lucky, your local library may have books on how to survey land specifically for mapmaking. If you're super lucky, they'll be ones written during the late 1800s ...

It will ultimately come down to the execution in the end (because sometimes things slip in unintentionally that work against your intentions in writing the story; see Twilight for an ...