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Well, I'm pretty late to the party, but it looks like you've finally figured out what it was about the story that you really wanted to write, @ewolf20, which is ...

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If you choose Options 2-4, please leave a post in the thread! Hello fellow inhabitants of the Writers Corner. A few months back, we of the Resources Crew sneakily snuck ...

Hey there. I'm a bit confused about what you're trying to pitch here, or what you'd like some feedback on. Is it about how we feel about the idea? Things ...

My favorite thing ever for planning out branching stories is articy:draft. The big downside is that you have to pay for the program, but if you're serious about publishing your ...

Fourteen is definitely not too old for chemistry sets. I got my first set when I was sixteen, and it was only because I saved up for and bought it ...

Late to the party, but this sounds really cool.

And thus did my ego suffer a most rude deflation. RIP ego. You'll grow back.

There's also dialogue. If your characters are strong enough, you won't need tags to indicate that X character is talking because your readers will have picked up on the character's ...

All stories sound cliche once you strip them down to the barest basics. People have been telling stories since time immemorial, and so while the trappings may change, there's very ...

How much planning do you do before you start writing? Some people get bored because they do too much planning and already know how everything will go, so there's no ...

It looks pretty standard, though you're missing a comma after "the rightful heir" and the "approach" should be an "approaches".

In English, every complete thought has at least one subject and one verb. Simple sentences are thus broken up into two main parts: the subject, which is everything before the ...

Just be careful that you don't have too many distinguishable parallels between your sources of inspiration and your own work. Tropes and cliches are par for the course, but particular ...

I'm the exact opposite of a planner, but I find that working on a different aspect of the writing often leads me to figure out a lot of the things ...