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in the next few days i might actually make a tutorial for fantasy cartography, it really does help me write, wanna see if it helps anyone else. I will love ...

for stabbing through well armored targets soldiers would use the "half sword technique" literally grabbing the middle of their blade in one gauntlet (making it more ridged). It's also worth ...

Is it OK to use for, the sake of rhyming, even though it might not be correct? Correctness > Rhyme Always. You should never, ever compromise the meaning of the ...

You can try the Snowflake Method .

There are novel and collection markets that accept unagented submissions, if you know where to look, and some of those markets only accept unagented submissions. That's the thing, though. You ...

YES. It shows them that you're already selling, which is always good, and gives you a leg up over people who have never published anything before.

Anyway I guess my SW story is more of a canon really? No. Canon is anything that the creator(s) has written or made known about a fictional universe. Fanfiction by ...

If it was the snowflake technique, you can find it here:

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It's really not that bad in that example. "The" is one of those so common, you don't notice them words (kind of like "said"), and I actually didn't notice all ...

Can we have a sample? Sometimes, the problem isn't necessarily the repetition of a word/phrase, but the repetition of a type of sentence structure.

How can the watcher see ?

If you read widely in your genre, you'd already have an idea of the answers to your first two questions. For the third question, Wookieepedia . The published Star Wars ...

The easiest way to find that out is to watch as many movies from the 90s as you possibly can in as many genres as you can possibly find. But ...

With regards to what Rach mentioned about the dialogue, this article goes a bit in-depth with explaining the difference between the many variations of how one asks for salt. There's ...