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Welcome to the Will Review for Food Forum! Will Review for Food (WRFF) is a place where you can request reviews for your works. Unlike most request forums, instead of ...

No, it is not original. As I said, that particular fall into darkness is pretty common. I think you'd be surprised how many antagonists/villains have that as their core motivation, ...

If by original, you mean never done before, then no. It's actually a pretty common trope for the antagonist to have a tragic backstory, and the particular fall into darkness ...

The one way I think a scenario like that would be feasible is if the one of the husband's siblings and their spouse both died in an accident and the ...

Writer's Market is the place to share publishing opportunities, so this definitely is allowed. Thanks for posting this. Something that might help raise interest would be to include a summary ...

Generally-speaking, your descriptions should do more than just describe how something looks/smells/feels/tastes. Descriptions, when done well, also reveal a lot about the characters, the mood of the s

Working titles are a thing. Basically, it's just a title you work with until you find a better one. Titles can be changed and rewritten just like any other part ...

No worries. This thread of yours definitely fits here. Since you have firsthand experience and one of your goals is to help people to understand your depression a little better, ...

The one big question I have about the basic premise is how does crime go unpunished? Since everything is linked together, evidence would be readily available to law enforcement and ...

I would question why, if the people living under the totalitarian regime are happy despite the lack of freedom, any rebels exist. How is it even possible for dissent to ...

Rosey is absolutely correct about the mythology of deer. Depending on where your story is set (it sounds like it might be in North America), there are countless legends and ...