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Is the event in the prologue important to the plot? If so, then yes. Otherwise, no. The plot is only concerned with the most important events.

How does that tie in to what resources you're looking for? Are you looking for resources about how viruses work? Are you looking for similar stories? A little bit more ...

I think the best question you can ask yourself is "What technologies do we use now in these scenarios?" and then, based on that answer, ask "How could it be ...

Some writers never have conversations with their characters. For some writers, characters really are just puppets, and it's simply a matter of skill in making these puppets appear as human-like ...

You won't know until you try it. Playing around with PoV can really add to a work. Typically though, books in a series keep a consistent PoV to help maintain ...

Um. Well, I think the above exchange just simultaneously illustrated some of the ignorance and romanticization of disability those who are disabled regularly encounter, which is one of the biggest ...

I personally would advise against mentioning any fanfiction you've written, no matter how popular it is, in any queries for the simple fact that fanfiction is unprofessional, and your query ...

Once upon a time, this thread was known as Review the Person Above You, and in the tradition of the forum games of old, it provided forty-odd people with reviews. ...

Welcome to the General Request Repository This is the place to make general review requests, and also the place to which general request threads are banished. While requesting here means ...

If the romance is such a big part of the story, why are you considering cutting it out? Why is the age difference even an issue? From what you've mentioned ...

I feel compelled to point out that the system you have going and the system of alchemy in FMA are completely different. The alchemy in FMA is actually a really ...

You can also offset the story into its own scene to help make the distinction between the story proper and the story-within-the-story more distinct. That way, if you do switch ...

How sad that no one's replied to this sooner. Anyways, the one thing that stuck out to me was how magic fits into this. Is the disaster caused by magic? ...

I think it might be fun to modify the Twin Mask version so that one is frowning. It could act as a little shout-out to the drama masks. They're also ...

Frequently Asked Questions What happens if I post a thread to request reviews? Threads like those are called general request threads, and they're not allowed in the WRFF forum since ...