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@StellaThomas nailed it with how your explanation still doesn't bridge the gap between how your general audience will view rape versus how the in-book culture views rape. As for the ...

Please try to stay on-topic. In any case, I think @Meandbooks brings up a good point. If you're using tags for every piece of dialogue, it points towards a larger ...

Posting them on here wouldn't make them not be actual novels. Depending on the publisher, so long as you retain all the rights to your work (which you do on ...

Those tribes also come from very different geographical areas, so I would be leery of mixing and matching. The stationary nature of those tribes also doesn't match up with the ...

I would recommend putting the scene under a spoiler or something to separate it from the rest of your post. It was really confusing reading your explanation and then realizing ...

I would say work on the one you love best. You'll be more likely to put your best work into it and have the most fun writing it.

Well, I do see two major issues with the idea as-presented. 1) When you say "Native American culture", which tribe are you using as your model? 2) If "The Great ...

As Lefty already mentioned, using the WRFF forum is a great way to get more feedback. Just be sure to read the rules first as they contain a lot of ...

Depending on how long the verse is, you have several options. Typically, the longer the verse, the more likely it will be offset from the regular text, usually by a ...

This was posted as a reply to someone else's question, but a lot of the advice applies to yours as well:

Ultimately what it comes down to is that characters in writing are more memorable for the things they do rather than their supposed physical appearances. Even people who claim to ...

I want to point out that "Nora" in Japanese means "Stray" (as in the "Noragami" anime that means "Stray God") and something like that. If it suits your story, then ...

It sounds like you have a purpose for the switching, which is good. I'm wondering why you are worried about the switching though. If you're worried about the audience being ...

The parking garage is a lot more plausible, and depending on how late it is, the garage would be pretty empty, not just of people but of cars as well. ...

My first impression is that your pitch is very cliche. There's several reasons: the phrases you use ("darkest demons" is particularly glaring) are so common as to be trite, and ...