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It's hard to say because the gaps in your summary make seeing how it all fits together really difficult. If you want a more solid opinion, providing the information that ...

There's also no rule saying you can't work on both of them at the same time. You know, if you really can't choose between them.

I think it's a really interesting idea, and I'd be curious to see how you pull it off. Then again, I really like frame stories, and One Thousand and One ...

I would recommend just chugging through the first draft so that you have at least one completed draft. Things like word choice and tenses are what are called line-edits, and ...

Is there something in particular about writing it that's giving you trouble?

Bioluminescence doesn't require an independent light source and is chemically-generated by a number of organisms. One of the most well-studied is the angler fish, which uses bioluminescence to lure pr

That depends on what you mean by "complex". There are a lot of species of fish and invertebrates which live in deep cave systems without any light exposure, and they ...

Well, the good news is that it's not true that nothing grows without light. There are multiple species that live and grow in deep cave systems where light never reaches, ...

So there's a few major issues I see with what you've presented so far: 1) How do Caroline and Trey know that Marissa is Charles's daughter? It seems like you ...

So, the biggest issue with your answer to the first question is how, despite how much information you've shared so far, I had no idea this was set in a ...

I was asking for a more specific location. Is it in the lower stretches of the Northeastern region of the continent? Northwestern? Bordering the Great Plains? In the South? All ...

That's why I started out by asking you questions about things that I saw as potential issues: to make sure they were actually issues before I suggested improvements. If you ...

I know that when I first joined I would tip-toe around the mods and viewed them as these untouchable creatures to be marvelled at. Know this: they walk into a ...

The reason why these assumptions came into play is because your posts didn't show that you had done the research, mainly through the contractions between your stated sources and your ...

Considering therianthropy and its variants are already derived from Greek (with kynanthropy referring specifically to creatures who shifted between humans and dogs in Greek mythology), if you want som