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I thought great, another post-apocalyptic horror novel You need to set off the thought somehow, otherwise it reads as a run-on, which can confuse your readers. Italics ( Great, another... ...

...I just realized I forgot to fix the placement of the "Under 30" bit... Oops. Just pretend it was fixed and all because I meant to. Really. >.> As for ...

Poster = YESPLZ! Flier = I'm not sure it would work. It's a bit busy to be flier-sized, and I'm not sure it would print out all that well what ...

And we have color and fixes (though the blurb stayed — sorry Gal :P)! Don't know why it became all antialiased, but whatever. >.> YWSflierV2S.png And black-and-white, of course. YWSflierV2BWS.png ...

As I told you in Chat, I apologize for any and all meanness in this critique. It is just now, in my sleep-needy, counting-fail, typo-plagued state that I have realized ...

First things first: the contrast needs to be fixed. Right now, everything is so dark, it all blends into one dark blob at first glance, and that's coming from someone ...

The textures in this are absolutely amazing, and you have an excellent eye for contrast and composition balance. In particular, the details on the pillows and lace in her skirt ...

You get better shading results if you use actual colors rather than relying on layer/brush effects. It's pretty obvious to more experienced arteests if you do rely on the effects ...

The edit looks quite nice, except that the ice cream is so blurred. I suggest that, if you have Photoshop or a similar program, that you crop out the ice ...

The first four are felt painting with acrylics? If so, you earn major brownie points from this corner. As Inbetweener already mentioned, you have a good eye for color. You ...

The one thing that no one else has directly mentioned yet is the sameness of all your pencil strokes. Having strokes of the same kind and in the same direction ...

*Seriously, I think I would have preferred if you'd said you'd slaved over it for like 4 hours....-_- Too bad. I didn't. Speed comes with practice. I'd like to know ...

Glad you all like this. :D @Knightley All will succumb to the cuteness! Mwahahahaha!!! And I drew it in about fourty minutes. :P It was just a matter of starting ...

I love leaf fluff. It is just amazing, and definitely think that's the one you should submit. The others are nice, but out of all of them, leaf fluff is ...

Last night, I felt like drawing something cute. And how much cuter can you get than a pink octopus examining some seaweed?