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Re: Haiku Battle
Frost coats the hollow — blades of ice spear the sky beneath sleeping trees.
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Prompt Attack
And you shall write a poem about chalk. Not just any chalk, mind you, but the yellow kind that produces cringeworthy screeches on cheap blackboards. Bonus points if you make ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Rhyme Battle
Misspellings in poetry are so passe; properties grammatical are now the way. Though the dithering's amusing, and the wanton ego-bruising, we should all make up — kiss the smack talk ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
Dry husks crinkle, the death-brown blanket I stand on — the trees shed their skin.
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Tiger by the tail
It's difficult to take this review seriously as a review for several reasons. First, and most importantly, this is all opinion-based. You really don't give us examples from the movie ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Forced Rhyme Schemes.
How about a case that's better? We'll agree that rhymes can fetter poetic expression simply because we're taught in school that rhyming was the One Thing that makes a poem ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Cspr's Art Dump #1
I wish these pictures were larger and a bit clearer. Upping the contrast wouldn't hurt, either. That said, you have an interesting style that reminds me of someone, only I ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies (Contest Cover)
There is no color unity to be found in this. There's a very icky yellow, a lurid red, black, intense blue, and puce. The puce and yellow in particular are ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: How I Color Hair on GIMP
Pretty good tutorial; nice and simple, and easy to follow. I find that using different sizes of brush adds a lot of volume and definition to hair especially. Going back ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Cliche, etc.
I shall number them 1-7 from top to bottom and refer to them accordingly. But before I go onto specifics, I SPY FLOATING CHARACTER SYNDROME! Fear not, though. We all ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Lined Paper *gasp*
So cute. Since these aren't serious drawings, you are spared critiques, but I must say, your creatures especially are cute. Ignore the turtle? Why would I ever want to ignore ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Nostalgia
The blur does add a nice unifying theme to all the pictures, but in some of the, it's a bit extreme and detracts from the image. If you have an ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: THE CLASSICS: Captain's Courageous
Starhunter was quite thorough in his review, and I second everything he said. I have to admit, the last paragraph was my favorite. All the mentions of the small events ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: A Stolen Life: A Memoir
This is a bit bare on details. You have the barest, basic premise laid out, but there's no real context or introduction to the memoir, and so there's no real ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Bowl of Rice
That. Is. So. Cute. Now for some nitpicks! The shading on the bowl is barely noticeable. I think the reason is that the spacing between the dithering is too wide ...
Aug 28, 2011
