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It depends on what you're trying to accomplish with the dreams. A separate dream section works if the dreams are supplemental and can be skipped without harming the main story. ...

Short answer: it's probably okay. Longer answer: you should be able to get away with it, seeing as how everything before that point, flashbacks and all, were (ideally) building up ...

Jumping between persons is tricky, tricky business, especially within a single chapter. I know. I've tried. And got mixed results. While I've moved away from using the different persons for ...

Read the first post. ;P Basically, yes you can join, and there is no such thing as "too late to join" in this SB. Send your profile!

An Act of God (not really) drowns out the cacophony of screaming victims with a monster hurricane. All along the Atlantic coast, the air is thick with rain turned to ...

Oh dear. It seems I forgot to let everyone know I was taking a very sudden month-long not-vacation. Well, I'm back. And a post shall be arriving soonish.

Religion in itself doesn't hold any - let's simply say - profound scientific knowledge, or truth about the origin of the Universe, as it does claim. But it does provide ...

@ Enema Withhold can also mean the following: 'keep to oneself' - which is what I meant. I just assumed that it was a direct equivalent of the Swedish definition. ...

@ Enema This, however, I did know. But it doesn't invalidate the essence of my point. Actually, it does. You said "it is also certain that the animals who we ...

Nr. 1: Different animals are found at different depths, meaning that they lived under different eras. Actually, it's not the depths the fossils are found at, but rather the strata ...

"I don't know the answer, but I know it's not god" Actually, I'd argue that the correct mind-frame is "I don't know the answer, but I know it exists and ...

Now that I've well and truly established that god is pretty bad for people on the whole Wait. You established this where? All I saw was arguing about the Bible. ...

I have nothing constructive to say AT ALL, but this thread is so lovely and the worldbuilding is so delicious, I just have to let you know that I've been ...

Goshdangit. I wish I could write as fast as you.

Malfunctions are also a good way of showing more of the inner workings of the machine. Depending on how exactly the machine works, different malfunctions could occur, and these malfunctions ...