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*appreciates the review despite forgetting the disclaimer whoops* Kylls are very forgetful creatures at times yes.

I'm just so amused that we're basically Team (Clerk). Tracking entries! Organizing lists! Running contests! Promoting positive representation! Go, Team CLRK!

I saw you liked my story. Mind reviewing it? :P

I see no closed sign, so... Impressions on tone and the possible interpretations you see would be the parts I'm focused on. Of course, anything else that you spot would ...

Hello there! I don't believe I've ever gotten a review from you, so let's change that. I'd be particularly interested in your impressions of the overall tone of the piece, ...

I usually either start out with a title, or come up with one at the very end. There is no in-between. Princessence is a case of the former, while Princess ...

I just want to 100% second @BlueAfrica's post-draft outline technique because it's one I use myself, and it works SO WELL when it comes to hashing out any major structural ...

I really liked the latest post. The art comparisons were spot-on and well-illustrated, and the examples you used for the sentence-level impacts were also excellent. I particularly liked how you ...

Exactly!

Oh shoot I forgot to screencap my clearing out last night at around 12:30 am. But worry not! I just cleared it out again. :3 Screenshot_20170930-093017.jpg

Planning is plenty of fun, and I do quite a bit of planning. Just not planning of the plot . Building up the settings, the characters, the motives and histories, ...

You're welcome, and I'm glad to hear it's working out for you.

Something that really helps is to have at least one complete draft of the story. Once you have an idea of what needs to happen, it's a lot easier to ...

Hey there! I checked out the blog post and the rest of the site, and while I don't have too much to say about the contents of the blog post, ...

There's nothing particularly wrong with using a topic > action structure, so long as you have more than just topic and action in each sentence. I seriously doubt your writing ...